Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

 


Another man died today,
What is there to say?
He died for your freedom, and
You’ll never get to meet him.

A great Soldier in heavens above…

He was a good man…
A great husband, son and father.
He left behind a 4 year old boy.
He will never wonder why
His dad is no longer alive.

That boy will become a great Soldier too,
He’ll fight just as his dad did.
He’ll fight for you and fight for me,
That’s what he was destined to be.

Another mother buried her son,
A man that died too young.
Looking up to sunny skies,
He’s around you; he’s in your grandkid,
He’s the spirit that keeps you alive.

A great Soldier in heavens above…

Another brother lost in the battle,
Have to keep pushing onward.
Kill the enemy that took our friend,
They’ll all go down in the end.

Protecting our homeland day and night,
On land, water and in flight.
Keeping our families safe,
As they hope to god and pray.

They’ll make it back home,
And some will be alone.
Make all the men and women proud,
The ones that have died
Serving our country proud.

Another soldier...
Another sad day...
Another second in which
Someone's life is changed.

A great Soldier in heavens above…
©2007-2009 *fadingshadow22
:iconfadingshadow22:

Author's Comments

I was watching the news...hearing about another soldier killed in Iraq...didn't catch the name or I would've mentioned it here...probably dedicated this to him...listened intently...but it had already past.
Another moment lost in time...a brief mention of a man so great that died for us...and yet he gets his 15 seconds of a how and where he died...no thank you,no condolences to the family. Nothing on the news....just a photo,a man in his camouflage...ready to "soldier on" as Pocketweasle would say. :)
He was one hero of many...one hero that goes unnoticed in another day.
I know alot of people support our troops,send packages and stuff...it just got to me.
Another soldier...another sad day...another second in which someone's life is changed. :(

Comments


love 3 3 joy 3 3 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 1 1 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:icondeth2u:
Wow very inspirational.
It reminds me of my dad who went to Iraq...
I hope hes okay.
:iconfadingshadow22:
Yeah...seeing that on the news really hit me today for some reason.
I really like how this turned out!
I hope he comes back soon.

--
x. You are as sick as your secrets x.
:iconthemindwithin:
That is a beautiful piece. War is a horrible thing. I wish we could all be pacifists but I know that it's just a theory that will never work. Kind of like Communism sounds great on paper never works in the world. It's a shame we can't all live in peace on this small planet. Never the less beautiful work, I enjoyed it.
:iconthevegasiantiger:
I totally agree with you, you give your life in battle and all you get its 15 seconds of fame. And the pacifist thing, well war does cause great change, however it comes at a very heavy price.

Great poem, made me think seriously for the first time today.

--
Everything you want is out there waiting for you to ask. Everything you want also wants you. But you have to take action to get it. ~Jack Canfield
:iconfadingshadow22:
Thank you...yeah peace would be awesome but sadly I don't think we'll ever see that day. It's only going to get worse,and I'm tired of watching everything go to hell. The world is too damn greedy for us all to get along...we can't just be happy with what we have.

--
x. You are as sick as your secrets x.
:iconfadingshadow22:
lol...glad I could help you think seriously. As much as it kills me to see all of it on the news...they should show apart of their life...let us get to know them through the tv. I just see stuff like that and wish I knew them...I've been thinking alot about volunteering but my mom thinks you have to be 18 to work with injured soldiers or homeless people and she won't help me find something. But eh...enough about me and my views.

--
x. You are as sick as your secrets x.
:icontombec:
Terrific work, Wahine!! This is a good one. You captured the emotion and imagery very well. As an ex-jarhead, I can really dig what you say. Do me a favor, read "War"in my gallery, lemme know what you think. kk?




"Freedom is'nt free. You've gotta pay the price, you've gotta sacrifice, you've gotta fight for your liberty!!"
:iconfadingshadow22:
Thank you! and thanks so much for the favorite. I think I like this one better then my "forgotten I think not". I think I read it...but I'll go check.

--
x. You are as sick as your secrets x.
:icondeth2u:
Thanks it feels really nice to hear that

Details

April 30, 2007
1.5 KB

Statistics

31
6 [who?]
80 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Site Map